This is an amazing game, you are doing great, keep it up, and other encouraging words!
I write a bit and recently found twine and started making my own game, and this is honestly everything I strive to be. Good job!
This is the best game, like... of all. The story is great, characters are all awesome, this is the first lewd game where I've genuinely wanted to help set my 'best friend' character up. The music video portions are amazingly done, the characters seem real and relatable and not just 'harem bingo'. Great stuff.